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Story Script
Plot:
It’s been about five years after Ed and Al had left through the gate. Roy is now the Fuhrer, Riza is still his assistant, and Hughes still has his job as Lead investigator and Head of security. All the know homunculus are gone, There is still a couple left that were never really out. Now Ed and Al have found their way home and have come back and Are on their way home.
Setting:
Hughes is in his office working on some paperwork from a weeks worth of requests for security detail switches and tests for State alchemist, which Roy didn’t want to look at, the rest were misc. piece left there. Sheska was bringing in one of two new officers that were going to be working in Hughes’s office. General Shiko Mononoke who just arrived to central from the eastern command post. The other was Lt. Col. Nij Chumeru who is a fresh new officer from the top of his class, who is capable of military command and hand-to-hand combat.
*Hughes sitting at his desk doing work. Mumbling over the work. Then he hears a knock at the door. And doesn’t look*
Sheska: Yes can I help you
Shiko: I’m here to report to Brig. Gen. Hughes
Sheska: Oh yes you’re the first one to arrive
Shiko: what do you mean?
Sheska: there is another officer who is working here but hasn’t arrived yet.
Shiko: alright (still slightly confused)
Sheska: come this way please (leads Shiko to Hughes’s office) sir the new officer is here
Hughes: let her in (not looking up from the paperwork)
Sheska: you can go in (moves out of the way)
Shiko: (walks up to Hughes’s desk and salutes) Sir General Shiko Mononoke reporting sir
Hughes: (looks up) alright have a seat
Shiko: (lowers salute and sits down)
Hughes: (looks for her report) I know it’s here
Sheska: (walks in and hands him the report) It was on my desk sir
Hughes: thanks Sheska (turns and looks at Shiko) okay lets have a look
Shiko: (sitting there)
Hughes: impressive back ground made it through the ranks pretty fast. Was second in command of the eastern division. Well I’m glad you’re on my team now.
Shiko: thank you sir. May I ask a question?
Hughes: (leans back in his chair) okay what is it?
Shiko: I’d like to know about the other officer who is going to be working in this office with us.
Hughes: Ah yes Lt. Col. Chumeru. I don’t know much but he is suppose to be one good soldier. He is just out of officers training. And was at the top of his class. He is suppose to arrive today or tomorrow on the train. That is all I know.
Shiko: alright thank you
Hughes: anything else that you would like to know?
Shiko: what will I be doing in this office?
Hughes: some paperwork, some out in the field work or doing security details for Roy.
Shiko: alright
Hughes: (looks at the clock) well it is getting late I think you should go get some sleep and get comfortable whit your living accommodations. I need to get home to my family.
Shiko: alright sir have a nice evening and I’ll see you tomorrow (gets up and starts to leave)
Hughes: meet me at the train station tomorrow.
Shiko: why sir?
Hughes: I think Nij will be in then since he isn’t in now.
Shiko: ah okay sir night
Hughes: night
*A couple Hours earlier on a train heading for central. Sitting in the passenger car dress as if he was a normal citizen. Behind him were what looked like brothers? In front of him were a mother and small child.*
Nij: (sitting eating a sandwich he bought at the last train stop and looking over a report) okay so these are my orders (looks at the map lying next to him) I have two more stops, So I should arrive in central by tomorrow morning, great that means I’ll be late for my report date damn.
Train conductor: (sits down across from Nij) you look like you’re from the military
Nij: (looks up) yeah what is it
Train Conductor: -stumbles- well…could…. You ….um… (Gun goes off)
Nij: (jumps up to see where it has come from) what the...
Robber 1: (points gun at Nij) not to fast their
Nij: -thinking to self- Damn it how did I let my guard down
Robber 1: okay no one do anything stupid and no one gets hurt
Nij: (looks at the dead train conductor) hm (lays the train conductor down and covers him up)
Man 1 behind nij: (turns to Nij) hey I think we could do this
Nij: what are you talking about?
Man 2: brother what happened the first time we did this
Man 1: yeah but I think I’ll do it with this guy while you protect the passengers here
Man 2: alright Ed
Nij: so your name is Ed?
Ed: yeah and this is my brother Al, So what’s yours?
Ni: Lt. Col. Nij Chumeru state military investigations department
Ed: oh nice
Nij: alright lets get going
*both Ed and Nij leaves to deal with the threat and resolve the issue. After about an hour Ed and Nij return and the train arrives the next station. Ed and Al get off and head off and the military picks up the robbers. Nij continues to central and sits in his chair and falls asleep for the rest of the ride to central.*
- by nijchumeru |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: The Train ride.
- Artist: nijchumeru
- Description: It's my revamp of what happens if some characters never died and years before the movie.
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: fullmetalalchemist fiction script
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Comments (3 Comments)
- jsonnia_94 - 01/31/2009
- Ed and Al, is it the name from FMA. 4/5
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- EnvyTheHoppip - 12/03/2008
- Nice :3 I like how it was written.
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- xhanni-chanx - 11/27/2008
- not bet my friend, i like the way the story flow. Inside the story the story line, the discription of it are amazing. I can feel the scene in the story that you write here. Keep up the good work my friend. Totally interesting to drag me here to read and i feel glad , i am doing that by being here and read everything in the story was .
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