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A boy known as my brother entered the Corflix Zone. It was a world like he had never seen. Stepping onto a circle with many strange symbols he was turned to a warrior of the Corflix Zone. He explored the place and I watched him with my all seeing eye. He fought his first monster and lost. I flew furiously to him. Floating closely to the ground with great power radiating off of me."Who are you?" He asked "You don't reconize me?" I said."No, should I?"A transparent image of my human self surrounded me."owh!" He gasped. "Where are we?" He asked me. "We are In the Corflix Zone, a world of my own creation. This world was created by my thoughts. In this world we live to fight and fight to survive. No one can be here and never fight." I told him.
"I wish to fight you." I told him."But why?" He wondered."You insulted me, and failed to understand me juring our time on earth. You push around like you are dominant over me. Well no more. You were never a true friend. Now it is time!" I tell my brother."So you think you can defeat me? Ha ha!" Nathan says."I know you wont." He tells me."I will give no mercy unto the!" I tell my brother furiously. As my eye glows and the arua flows, my brother looks at me in fear!"It is over for you!" I yell. I strike him! I create a tornado of humongous size! It blows things around and blows him away! Then I go speeding after him! Attacking him furiously. The last hit put him to sleep. I wished to one day destroy him. I knew that this was not the day. When will this end?
- by King Exseada |
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- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: When Will You Understand
- Artist: King Exseada
- Description: My brother fails to understand. I would hurt him if I could. I just want him to understand how he has made me hate him.
- Date: 11/20/2008
- Tags: power inside creature
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Comments (5 Comments)
- King Exseada - 12/01/2008
- i now know i don't hate him to the point that i would kill him.
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- Heemo_Emo - 11/30/2008
- nice one,pal
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- chololateluver - 11/30/2008
- NICE!!!!! wink
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- Dudethang - 11/30/2008
- wow, that's actually really gd. "we live to fight and fight to survive".. i'll be remembering that one wink xx
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- Smcoolem - 11/29/2008
- wow
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