Never Ending Nightmare

• Artist: PiiSH POSH_
• Description: this is chapter 1 of my new story im telling!
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  (this is not my best but more to come!)
• Date: 11/18/2008
• Tags: never ending nightmare

I knew right away today was the day. Today was the day of my life. Highschool. Some people call it magical others may call it a fear and some might even call it just school. What I call it is a dream. Golden High was no other highschool. The school has the highest rate of people getting pregnant, kidnaped, or even hurt. But that wasn't the thing that made people scared. People always believed there was some sort of magical thing in this highschool. I'm gonna figure out what that is.
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My name is Kathrine. But people call me Korri. I was a tall, skinny, freckled nosed, long chocolate brown haired freak. I wasn't popular but I wasn't unpopular. My friends are just normal. I'm always embarased though to be seen with them it just makes me look more like a freak. Other than that it was time to take my first steps into Golden High.
"Sup"
"How have you been"
"Did u lose weight?"
Those were all the questions people have been saying right when I walked in. No one of course noticed me. But I was pretty much used to it.
"Locker 9973." I said.
I found my locker and inside there was your normal and basic school supplies. Math my first subject. I was always good at math but this year I just want to fit in so i'm taking algebra ll instead of geometry.
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I walked into class. There he was and she was and bla. The cheerleaders and football jocks. All that was left was me. A nobody.
"So did you guys hear about all these things about supernatural stuff around these very lockers?" said Tiffany
(she was head cheerleader the ruler of school. The girl I wish I was.)
"Well yeah but Tiff you really believe it it's just a bunch of crap made up by some seniors one year as a prank." said Marcel
(of course you guessed the quarter back though i'm not very attracted to him like most girls)

I could'nt help but to cut in but I didn't I did not want to ruin my chances to be friends on my first day. What I couldn't help though is the thought that I was being watched by someone all day long. But I was right someone was. When I got to my locker at the end of the day there was a message on my phone saying:
"yes your right im following your every foot step when u come into this school."
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to be continued

Comments

[KantSpelll]

I think its a good start, and I also think it would be okay to say someone is a cheerleader. There are about a thousand different writing stiles, and I should know. I read 71 books last summer.

[xXyenniXx]

cool mystery i like it keep going! =]

[PaperSongs]

Let's start with your painfully obvious lack of grammar skills and work from there, shall we? Then I think maybe move on to the fact that you repeat yourself in the first few lines, and brackets within a chapter or any fiction writing are always a sign of a bad writer. If you can't somehow SHOW us that some chick is a cheerleader, then you shouldn't be writing. Never TELL, always SHOW. Rule number one of writing.