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He pulled the door open and looked inside and imediatley jerked his head back in duscust. He slammed the door shut. Just two people going at it, shouldn't have looked. He walked back to the room but something else seemed strange. He remembered leaving the door open but it was closed. These doors where heavy and couldn't close themselves. He ran to the door and swung it open to find her next to it.
"Why did you shut the door?" he asked as he entered the room.
"I....saw something." She staggered
"What?"
"I-i-i-i-i-i don't know. But it scared me."
He hugged her and pulled tight. "You'll be ok now."
They continued to go out the door. He almost slipped in something. It was a crimsol liquid. Blood. It lead back to the room he just came out of and down the hall to a door with bloody hand prints all along the floor and the door of the closed room.
"Stay here." he said to her as he walked down the hall.
He gripped the door knob but it was locked and slippery from the blood on it. He turned around and walked back.
"we should leave." He said as he grabbed her by the arm.
He pulled her to the door but something was wrong. There were chains on the door. It couldn't be opened. They banged on it as hard as they could. Then tryed to brake out a window but there were bars on the outside. Then....footsteps.
~Final Installment wil be tommarow on halloween. =3
- by whatevenisthisidk |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/30/2008 |
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- Title: Dark Halloween Horror Cont.
- Artist: whatevenisthisidk
- Description: A continuation of my first story.
- Date: 10/30/2008
- Tags: dark halloween horror cont
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Comments (4 Comments)
- fredzol - 11/10/2008
- I found it a little interesting and please correct your grammar, I think you should have described the characters it left me a little empty, I don't like when they have characters running around and I have no clue what they look like...
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- XxEmoBlondexX - 11/06/2008
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sweetness
very cool
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- Confictura - 10/30/2008
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im sorry, but....this wasnt interesting, and besides...do you have a spell check on your computer??
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- MYmoribo - 10/30/2008
- hmm... short, but not bad. i can't wait to read the next part tomorrow :]
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