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Prologue
It was dangerous and I knew it. But I had to try, at least try. I opened the door to the front of the school and entered. My heart was pounding faster than normal. Fear threaded through the uncertain feelings I had. I looked back once, only once. The dark coridors seemed to suck me up into its hopeless hallways. I closed my eyes. It was too dark to see anyway. With my eyes closed my powers built up even greater allowing me too see without light.
"I'm coming," I whispered knowing he could hear me. A creepy laughter filled the halls. Sending shivers of hatred crawling up my spine. The speakers built into the walls came on. Someone breathing deeply laughed darkly. Then his voice was speaking.
"Come to save the world my little girl. Hmm, Tori?" he taunted. I turned down a right tunnel like hall. Going for the auditorium. And then I was there. And so was he.
"I'm not here to save the world," were the first words out of my mouth. "I think humans have that under control for themselves." He stared at me. His cold stare burned. Burned me right down to my marrow.
"Then are you here to give yourself up. So your family and precious boy can live in peace?" he asked raising an eyebrow.
"In a way. I'm saving them. They can make the world a better place more than
I can. Especially since my power is Bad Luck. Maybe I should lend some to you"
I threw my arms out and the ceiling above him collapsed. Hack laughed again and leapt for me. He knocked me down coming up over me. I looked at his neck then up at the wall. He gripped my own throat. I clentched my teeth and kicked in his gut. Hack tumbled off me clutching his stomach.
"Lets see who wins," I challenged.
He looked up abruptly and smiled. He was pretending. Hack's hand came up and I gasped out of pain. His sword enter my body before I could stop it.
"My sword," I said.
"Yes, the very sword to kill you. A worthy demon of life."
"I'm not a demon", I whispered.
He twisted the blade and I screamed falling. Black ink of unconciousness seeped into the air around me.
- by ms_Punkette |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: Fated
- Artist: ms_Punkette
- Description: adjusted to be shortened
- Date: 10/18/2008
- Tags: fated adjustshortened
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TheYellowCrayonz - 10/18/2008
- I loved it. Your writing makes mine look bad. Wait my writing is bad!
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- kovujackson - 10/18/2008
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ok dude is there more of this?! i totally want to know the whole story,
well written and total awesomeness ^^ thumbs up dude - Report As Spam