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The morning sky was a bright color of ruby and diamond. The sky looked plain, but gave a mournless glow as the sun rose slowly to it's height. The morning air as sweet as the stream that runs through it calmly.
Every tree in the forest hummed softly as the wind blew comfortly towards the west, bringing in the scents of various different flowers. Each aroma was sweeter than the next, ending in the sweetest of all : The Cherry Blossoms. The trees also smelled of an alurring aroma that swept through each open passage in the highlt over-crowded forest, which streamed of new life every sun rise.
A lonely person walked along a path that waved safely through the density around. Each step was quiet and hardly left a mark in the dirt. An even pace kept up with the stranger as he calmly hummed the path, never bothering to stop and open his or her eyes.
The traveler was dressed a garnet with a sash across the chest area, appearing multiple times. The slacks worn were wide for comfort, maybe being used for long walks and a few running distances. Woven shoes silently touched the ground, then lifting up for the next step, not once making a sound. Leather gloves covered his hands, protecting them from the cold air.
Short, blonde hair covered the the face of the traveler, the eyes lids barely showing.
The wind blew slightly harder, blowing the person's hair up, revealing the features of his face. He looked young and handsome, not needing his eyes to appeal to anyone. His eyes slowly opened, until opened enough to see the texture and beauty that poured from the bright color in his pupils. Each eyes was as green as the fresh leaves that blew in the wind across the land, reflecting the lonleiness that seized the happy in him.
He stopped on the trail, keeping his focus on the path ahead. Without another moment to spare, he loked up into the sky as it's beauty shwon brighter than anything he's seen before. As the wind dissapated, words that had little emotion slowly ran out of his mouth. "You are lucky. You have the world to see, many faces to find, more people to meet. Loneliness is something you never have to worry about."
When the wind blew in response to his words, a smile found its way on his lips. "Thank you. I will try to find my path along my journey. Farewell, Emerald, my love. I'll see you one day, when, i too, leave this world behind." He waited a while longer, knowing he would get another repsonse from the wind.
When the wind did blow again, he felt the softness of a kiss that held to his lips for a few seconds, then disappeared with the calm breeze. Not long after, a beautiful voice was heard close by, soothing the pain that held in the space. "I'll always be here for you. Never forget me, Saro, my love. I love you more than anything."
Saro stood in place as he heard the voice of his beloved, not once wanting to forget her. Not shortly after, tears started to pour down the sides of Saro's face, glittering in the morning light that hit each sparkling tear like a bright star. He wiped the back of his glove over his cheeks to clear his face of all signs of tears. When the tears rooled down more slowly, he turned down the path he was heading and started walking, taking one step at a time.
I love you, too. I'll make sure to come back for you, so we can be together, forever, Saro thought happily, knowing Emerald would hear his thoughts.
Saro walked into a clearing in the forest, knowing he has found the mid-point to the path. The path ended before getting to the opening in the forest, so he had to walk the last four yards to the edge.
As Saro ot closer to the middle of the field, he could see around him all the flowers that grew beautifully, making the place looked like a meadow for peace and tranquility. Each flower that bloomed had its own delicate structure and scent, which painted a perfect picture of a dream paradise.
Saro couldn't help but stop as he saw the bright glowing of a flower with swirls of reddish-yellow pedals. he walked over to it and picked it off the stem, bringing it closer to view better. As he examined the texture and simplicity of the young thing, he slowly remembered that this was the first flower that he had given Emerald on their first date, especially to the meadow that he now realized was also the place they had their first kiss.
Minutes passed as Saro reminensed on the past that was so dear to him, the times when he was happy, when he thought nothing could go wrong. the wind blew on him, feeling harder than last time. Saro jerked his head up as he sensed a presence in the field, besides his own. he set the flower down near its family of flowers as he slowly crept to a tall bushel of flowers, hiding in their midst.
Saro waited behind the tall sunflowers for the new presence to walk by. He thought to himself for a few minutes as the aura got closer and closer to, his back hair standing up in anticipation. When he caught slight glimpses of their clothing, the wind blew toward him from the direction of the stranger, bringing an aroma that had caught him off guard. He smelled sweet strawberries and roses, enchanting him more as the anonimous person walked further down the flower path to where he was.
Saro broke from his trance at just the right time his path was crossed and he lunged out of the flowers, landing on top of a young girl who he didn't recognize.
Saro was stunned when he realized what he was doing. He stared down to find that a young, beautiful girl was under him, their faces not being more than two feet from eachother. Saro noticed that she started to blush, knowing that made him embarrassed as well. He quickly examined her features and came to a conclusion. She was more beautiful than any girl he has seen on his entire life, she even had better looks than his own beloved Emerald.
When the girl seemed to have had only a little blush on her cheeks, ii didn't take long for Saro to realize he was under her now, him arms pinned down by her hands, her legs preventing him from forcing her off. Now, she was the one who held dominance over him, having her face hold no more than half a foot from his. Saro could smell the sweet breath that she breathed on him from so close together.
Saro stared up at her, looking into her golden-red eyes, knowing she was looking into his. He couldn't help but notice a strong,seducing vibe that ran from her gaze into his, leaving him speechless. Before he could say anything to her, she already had her face on his, their lips locking in place as Saro felt like he was being controlled.
Saro couldn't help but enjoy the soothing soft lips that met with his own, making him remember how his first kiss with Emerald was. But something was different. He felt want and need flow into him through the girls' lips. The kissing also had a sort of spark to it as she continued to hold him still underr her lightweight, seeming to almost to be seducing him at the same time.
It was a long ten minutes before the girl discontinued the seduction and lifted her head only a foot from his. When she spoke, her voice brought soothingness into Saro's heart. "I've found you at last. I've been looking for you. I had been wanting your presence for so long, and now you are under my control. It's time i have had my chance with you. One more kiss should bind you to me, forever."
Time went by quickly as the girl leaned back in and took another long kiss from Saro, but this time, it felt passiontate. Saro knew he had been seduced enough so he left her to do whatever she wanted with him, not caring how she would use him, as long as it was more of this.
- by Shirku Zero R- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: 'First Blood' Chapter 1
- Artist: Shirku Zero R-
- Description: this is the beginning chapter to the story i am writing....as you read you will come to a scene that is so sad....it made me cry as i wrote it....this is Chapter 1..and this story is an actual fiction...the girl towards the end is a vampire....but she isn't affected by the sun.....
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: first blood awakening
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Chou Onima - 12/03/2009
- awesome Shirku! 5/5
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- Surrie_Surunasu - 12/06/2008
- woooow..this is soooo romantic.....I started writing too!!! U should continue!!
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- Shirku Zero R- - 10/12/2008
- many ppl have said i had a talent for writing stories
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- vickieswag - 10/12/2008
- -Sigh- Its soooo good.
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- Shirku Zero R- - 10/12/2008
- thx
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- azn_viet_angel95 - 10/12/2008
- beautiful, i love it! i could see it happening already! turned into a move, more or less,...
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