- As i throu the tedy bear into hell i cryed becase i used to be a good kid but now i killed pepole i coldent save them.Well i had to go back i remeber about how im on life surport every ware i go.I was 6 years old going to the carnival for the first time.When a man shot my dad while he was driving becase of that he just got divorced .The car swerved and we crashed a pipe was shoed throu my chest and my parents were dead.I woke up in the ER and i was on 20 difrent machines i was dead .But 5 years later still alive parents dead i snuk out one time and my heaart failed i woke up front of the grim reaper and he said i will let u live if if u become the grim reaper i tire of my powers.I replyed ok and hear i am well i cant belive it so i cryed
- by NeverBornPain |
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- | Submitted on 10/05/2008 |
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- Title: angel of death part 5 why
- Artist: NeverBornPain
- Description: dont knok me down for my speelen i know its bad so wat plz read last 4 ok ( im usen peirods now am lazy but i like my writings and im A.D.D. so i write in short bursts
- Date: 10/05/2008
- Tags: angel death part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Br0th3r0b1ivi0n - 08/03/2010
- Trying to read that is like sticking nails in my brain! Work on your spelling!
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- eternalXheart - 10/06/2008
- kyoot ,do u have a thing out for my buddy here ?and every one else at the areana?if mispelled words bugs u so much ms."thusly"
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- Wei Hui - 10/05/2008
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1. The writers arena is not an instant messanger. There is no need to quickly write everything out, so shortening words and otherwise being uncaring about it is pointless.
2. If you don't spell properly, then most people won't be able to understand what the hell you're saying, and thusly won't be able to judge your story plot as they're supposed to.
3. Bad spelling will make you look very, very stupid.
Just a few reasons why you should pay attention to your spelling, even if you have A.D.D - Report As Spam