I like you

• Artist: WomanofWhite
• Description: This is a 1 minute monologue some of you said it was way to short on my last one.and i remembered i didn't put that on here. yes if you like it u may print it.
• Date: 10/01/2008
• Tags: like

I like you



Marcy: Dug how are you is football okay?

Dug:Yeah if you like warming the bench a whole lot.

(he starts to laugh)

Marcy:Haha so well did you hear that crazy rumor that I like you?

(he raises his right eyebrow)

Dug:Yeah do you feel unconfortable?

(she moves around on the bench they are sitting on)

Marcy:Not really I just wanted to say that rumor is not true

Dug:That's to bad I like you too.

Marcy:Really?Did you know it was true?

Dug:Actually I wasn't really sure till after you said it you blushed.

Marcy: Hey don't make fun.

(Dug grabs her arm and kisses her for a good 5 seconds)


The End

Comments

[beckithewatermage]

There isn't really much substance to it, and like you said, it is short. It would be nice to see it edited so perhaps we can see a little of the background between them and the setting around them. It would then flesh it out and give the reader more to go upon.

Oh, and just one tiny little thing, there are two characters, and so therefore it is a dialogue. ^^;

[xCubia]

I know it's dialogue
but
it felt so unnatural.