- I was lying on the ground. There was also a truck in front of my body, everybody was looking at me. What happened? I thought. I think I just died. I sunk down into the ground, No wait! What's happening?!and that's how my story starts. I was completely under the pavement, I plunged into darkness, but never emerged into light. I wanted to scream, but when I did, nobody heard me. I suddenly emerged from the pavement into a land with lava-red rocks and a sky that looks like it was cursed with eternal darkness. No! Not the underworld! When I reached the ground, I looked around, nothing, I walked to a building and opened a the door, then there was a big inferno of fire, only a few feet away from my face. Why am I here? I quickly slammed the door shut and ran, I lost my courage, I couldn't help it, I fell to my knees and cried, "Help me! Get me out of here!" just as I thought would be my reply, silence. I just sat there, tears falling from my face, I knew nobody was going to help me now, now that I'm dead. I prayed and pleaded to God and said a few prayers. Knowing I would just wither away and completly die here, I saw a light, I also heard a voice say, "Ryan, I heard your pleads. Come here with me and we'll talk." I didn't care, I just wanted to go home, home with all of my friends and family, so I went into the light, it brought me up and I appeared in a different land, a land of clouds. Am i seriously in heaven? I walked a bit and saw God, he was there in front of me. He was smiling at me. I walked towards him, he opened his mouth like he was about to tell me something. But there were no words coming out of him, instead I heard a siren. I woke up and realized that I was dreaming, I'm still alive! I'm still on Earth! I thought. I was in an ambulence, my girlfriend Jamie was next to me, so was my best friend Aaron. I couldn't fight the tears in my eyes, "Hey, your going to be fine," said Aaron, "After all, you are in the..." I tried to speak, it hurt but it was the best I could do, "The what?" I croaked Jamie leaned over and said "You are in the underworld." At that, they both laughed, an evil laugh, not like their real voices. I thought to myself, Oh hell...
- by NostalgicAtBest |
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- | Submitted on 08/19/2008 |
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- Title: My vacation in the underworld
- Artist: NostalgicAtBest
- Description: all in the title peeps.
- Date: 08/19/2008
- Tags: underworld death crash
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Xx Danni Red xX - 12/16/2008
- the end part cool middle and begining ok
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- RachieBug - 08/19/2008
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Dude, your a good writer. =]
I loved it.
Niiice job.
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