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I stood there looking at the black roses that lay on her grave why did she have to leave why now. Two days went by my granma gave me a envelope "what is this" i said she looked at me then left i opened the blood red envelope and pulled out a letter, i looked and read "dear alice if you are reading this i must be dead, i'm sending you to england to meet your father please be nice to him it wasn't his fault he left,elizabeth will book your tickets for tomorrow so go pack your bags,love mother p.s things are not always as they seem" i was shocked after fifteen years i'm finally going to meet my dad so i packed my bags and went to eat dinner "so hun are you glad your going to meet your father" my granma said after finishing a mouth full of pasta i replied by saying "no i'm scared" after dinner i went to bed,
after a nine hour plane ride which included a little kid kicking my seat and nosey old people i arrived in england. It was raining i walked into the airport and went to get my bags, i looked to see a man holding a board saying "miss alice sterling" i went over "hello who are you" i said abit confused he replied "i have to drive you around, where ever you want to go i have to drive you there but first you have to go home" i followed him in the car he talked about politics,we drove past a bunch of emo kids but sadly i had to go home they looked at the BMW Individual 5 Series Sedan with tinted windows,about an hour later we pulled up to a big house looked old and creepy. I walked to the door there stood a young looking dude with messy black hair,pale skin and dark eyes he looked and said "you've grown alice"
- by Angel-from-my-nightmare22 |
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- | Submitted on 08/14/2008 |
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- Title: black roses~part one~
- Artist: Angel-from-my-nightmare22
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Description:
a little story i wrote called black roses this is only part one
~sorry for any spelling mistakes~ - Date: 08/14/2008
- Tags: vampire roses black
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mariliathecoolestgirl - 01/23/2011
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its too good nc story I except more in the next chapter.
I wait for the next part.Plz inform me if u wrote the next part. - Report As Spam
- Microsoft Office - 12/22/2008
- =.= pointless.. it makes me sad xD
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- cry_102 - 12/14/2008
- your a little scratchy with the spelling, but all in all, you wrote a damn good story
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- Flootsy Gaz - 12/13/2008
- Gramical errors, alot of gramical errors. Made it hard for me to read. But it does have potential. I'll give it 2. Sorry just my opinion.
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