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Demise just awoke from his chambers. Despite no longer being a vampire, he still enjoyed the coffin bed. He got up and prepared his armor. Though armor can be made automatically with his powers, he wanted something a little tougher and aerodynamic. He made it a while ago with his crystal powers and he shaped it using his acid powers to get of the tough ridged ends. After using a diamond pen to carve on it, He would begin to paint. He used a darker shade of blue then the armor. He would begin to place his armor on his body. It was not a plate armor completely. He first put the Diamond Chain Mail on his upper body. He then would put a diamond chest plate on for extra protection. He would then put on armor for his lower body. He had Diamond Plated tights. They were only diamond plated around tow thirds of the thighs. it was to protect the knees, shins thighs. It was held together by more Diamond chain mail. This made it more mobile and conformable. He would then put on boots made of a tough leather on the inside that was much more conformable then the outside diamond plated surface. He then put on a piece of cloth made of Diamond Fibers. it would help protect the middle area of his body. Next he put on copper chain mail gloves. This was to protect his blade from the next item which was a special claw. It was an Acid Claw made from his power over acid. The one on his left arm would be quite large. The one on the right only had it on each individual finger. This was important for close range attacks. Before he put the claws on though on though he would put on a dragon shaped helmet made of crystal as well. He would then use his power of Telekinesis to slow place his claws on with out damaging the armor. Once the armor is on though, he can nope wield swords and other weapons. He would then Grab his sword and go out to Hunt.
To be Continued......
- by TheArkShadow |
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- | Submitted on 08/07/2008 |
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- Title: A life of a Sinner Part One
- Artist: TheArkShadow
- Description: My Myspace Opener on myspace this is the first paragraph. Its RPing
- Date: 08/07/2008
- Tags: role playing character opener
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Feminist Toad - 01/18/2009
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You say diamond a lot, but that's understandable.
Try to read what you write out loud to youself, it's easier to catch grammatical errors that way.
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- TheArkShadow - 08/07/2008
- Your kind of being a smart a** about the acid thing you know what I mean and I have 3 elements to use Crystals one of them and Diamond sounded better I just happened to have a lot of armor.
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- selket16 - 08/07/2008
- what kind of acid? I mean if it's citric acid somebody is going to have some serious sting in their eyes. Also you overuse the word diamond, I think at a certain point it becomes a given that it's a suit of armour made of diamond. The second to last sentence, you use the word "nope" when you mean a different word. If you mean "not" then the next sentence is impossible and if you mean "now" than this sentence is unnecessary as the next sentence proves it
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- Joeyc2410 - 08/07/2008
- SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET Story! 5/5! , you said put on twice smile and a few spell mistakes though, read my story? smile
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