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As we walked into the city of Hart, We saw a whole army of soldiers, clad in black armor covered in symbols that looked like a sword slicing through a blood red heart. Along with there armor, They had swords with hair splitting blades. "Pull up your hoods," I said, "and be sure no one sees your face. It could get us killed."
As we split up to get food and other suplies, a man aproched me and commented on Nato. "That is an exquizite tiger. Why, the only two people that are supposed to have those are the Destroyer, and the Seeker." the man said.
Thinking for a moment before a look of knowing spread across his face, he dropped to his knees and said so that only I could hear, "I hail you, oh great one. Please, take me with you on your journy." I looked into Nato's bright blue eyes and he spoke into my mind, "Let him come, and tell him to bring any one who will be loyal to you. We will need as much man power as we can posibbly get."
Looking back to the man I said to him, " At the eleventh hour of night, meet me in the woods. There is a clearing about a quarter of a mile in. And bring any one loyal to me." Saying this, I turned and walked away before the man had a chance to reply.
"Nato, how will we know if there is a traitor in the group? They can gain information on us and we would never know it." I said nervously. "Leave that to me Mila, I will take care of every thing." Nato responded.
That night, Naton hid up in the trees, blending in perfectly, making certain we would have a suprise attack if the man was coming with soldiers. Layta had her sword in its' sheath at her hip, and her bow strung. Nato and I stayed upon the ground to meet the villagers.
Eventualy, I saw a small glimer of tourch light in the distance, and stood to wait for them to approach us.
When they finally came into the clearing, they looked around until I stepped from the shadows and said, "I hope those torches wern't lit until you got a ways into the woods, or you could have been followed."
"No, we waited until we were fifty feet into the forest before the torches were lit." said someone. "Good. Now, if you are turned away, leaqve quietly, and you won't be killed. Other than that, welcome. You are all now part of the Seeker army." I announced to many shouts and cheers.
- by lalaland2106 |
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- | Submitted on 07/30/2008 |
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- Title: Fate III
- Artist: lalaland2106
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Description:
Chapter three. Three orphans traveling from place to place trying to survive. One very special white tiger. A destiny only time will reveal. magic, wonder, and awe.
PLEASE tell me if you like it. give a comment. if enough people like it, I might do something with it. tell me how it could be better. - Date: 07/30/2008
- Tags: fate tiger orphan destiny magic
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Little Princess Crown - 08/31/2008
- i like it, is there a chapter 4 yet?
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- cariiborealis - 08/19/2008
- Well it's in Mila's point of view so you should know its her explaining. You did get better as you went on. Must stories start off slow and not as good as you would like but once it gets farther along it gets much better. You need to write more.
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- Arcwolf1001 - 08/11/2008
- (not trying to sound cocky) your getting better at this as u go on.
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- emrykins - 07/30/2008
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ooh i's nice i like the word-play in it. But you may want to explain who's talking more often...
good worrk! smile - Report As Spam