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We had just gotten another bounty opertunity. Her name was Bastila Ortega. She was said to have a power called battle meditation. That meant she could see the outcome of any battle. We had just deployed our Banshees, and I led them. Then out of nowhere a missile hit The Heaven's Hope(a ship in my fleet), and debris flew off of it and collided with my Banshee. It exploded. Then Brandi took command since i was almost certainly dead. She managed to use our Banshees to destroy the Freedom(the enemy cruiser that destroyed my Banshee). They then landed on Tarius, the planet that Bastila were on. Then out of nowhere John Morris, our demolistins expert was shot through the chest by a sniper rifle. Then 30 men and women took Brandi and the troops prisoner. They then threw Eric off of a ledge along with our weapons, because he ran his mouth off at them in defiance. Luckily they didn't find his grappling hook, he then found me after repelling down. Ihad lost my eye and hand. Over the next few weeks I recovered and we waged a full on assault of their base. It was just me and Eric. We captured Bastila and freed Brandi and the others. We voted and lets Bastila go because she was only 15, and the guy that wanted her would have skinned her. So she decided to join us and we all killed the guy who hired us, named Jorga Moore. So we headed for some r&r. Mission complete
- by xX_corryrm_Xx |
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- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: bounty huntin'
- Artist: xX_corryrm_Xx
- Description: hunting bounties
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: bounty hunters
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Robot Squirrel - 01/28/2009
- Needs more details. The story just doesn't work without any descriptions!
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- princess_ashe2 - 07/27/2008
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I was good but kind of quick. You might want to spell check it too.
Just a though biggrin but otherwise I liked it. - Report As Spam