- A piercing scream and a silent whisper. Should he listen to the one in need or the one with a story to tell. Both characters keep continuing. The whisper undistinguishable, and the scream is irresistible. He couldn't decide. He tries to go closer to the whispering voice, afraid of what the scream might bring to him. The piercing scream is to much, it keeps pulling him closer and closer. A rotting shack appears, the first thing he saw. Through a window he sees a young woman being tortured. A he looks a tear runs down his eye. A scarred face shows up in the window. He slowly opens his eyes. He was asleep, it was a dream, but the tear was still there. He had a connection to the women,he just didn't know what it was. Yet.
- Title: A Piercing Scream
- Artist: samoht05
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Description:
Maybe a future book to write, maybe not.
I wrote it when I was bored and thought it was good. - Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: scream
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Comments (5 Comments)
- samoht05 - 12/31/2008
- the criticism really helped me, thank you
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- Dragon_Fears - 12/29/2008
- smile 5/5 because it was interesting i hope you write more..
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- Mulzar Takeroeshi - 12/20/2008
- very interesting *heads toward the screams* 5/5
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- VinDrops - 07/17/2008
- You have grammar mistakes, and your description? It's not very good. Read to improve. Movies help too. Just listen to the screenplay =P. Good luck!
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- HannahELCriss - 07/17/2008
- Its okay...Figure out a title-a good one- and try to continue it. It would be very interseting. wink
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