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priest: "do you Louis take Bell as your lawfully wedded wife?"
Luis:"i do"
Priest:"do you Bell take Louis as you lawfully wedded husband?"
Bell:"i do"
The wedding was grate and we all had fun.but it was not only a wedding -it was a haunting.
Let me explain.
When the priest was done he finally said "you may kiss the bride"
it was the best kiss in the world.
But the touch of his Lips... They were cold. Like i just kissed ice.
i did not think about it at the time because it was my wedding, the last thing i would want to think about is something going wrong.
But not thinking about it does not make it not happen or just poof away..
On with the party. we danced.. we sang, and yes we got drunk whee
But at the end. when people were starting to leave,it seamed as if Louis was getting bluer and bluer and bluer..
i was getting really worried..but i just thought the wine was getting to me.
but i thought wrong.
When we got home.. i was feeling kinda bad because Louis said not to invite his parents..
and we did not but we had such a good time!
so a few minutes late.. i decide to call them..
his mom picked up the phone she said"hello?"as if she were just crying..
i said"yes.. this is bell.. i am sorry you could not come to the wedding"
there was a sniffle then she kept going"oh.. you had a wedding?"
"to whom were you getting married to?"
she asked.
"Luis"
there was a gasp and then silence."whats-"
and thats all i could say. the phone was hung up.
i rushed to Louis's parents house as fast as a could(which was pretty slow considering the fact i was in a wedding dress)
when i got there i did not even bother to knock... i burst in to find Louis's mother laying across the floor.
When i got a tariffed look his father started to explain.
"Luis died.. 2 weeks ago from a heart fail.. he did not want you to know for it was almost you wedding day.. i am sorry.."
i felt a chill go down my spine. and ran back home
there was a note on the door saying
"Bell.. you are the love of my life. i did not want to leave you....
my heart could not stay strong...
ho i left you may ask? well remember the time i 'stayed out all night'?
thats kinda when it happed..
i am sorry..
Love
Luis..
- Title: Married to the dead
- Artist: Leadoux
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Description:
a girls gets married
later she finds out her spouse is dead..
PLEASE COMMENT!
this is my first story and i would like to know if it is good or not.
♥Leadoux - Date: 10/24/2008
- Tags: married dead
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Leadoux - 10/24/2008
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Thank you for the comment!!
ad yea.. i have a little trouble with spelling.
and ok.. i will try to add more detail.. - Report As Spam
- x0xInkx0x - 10/24/2008
- That's nicely done. :] I like it a lot. Though double check spelling and maybe add more details. :]
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