- by Brandi Arthtic |
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- | Submitted on 03/04/2013 |
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- Brandi Arthtic - 03/14/2013
- smile Thanks for the feedback! To be honest this is my first time and I just did it for the fun of it ^^ But I will take what everyone has said and think about it.
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- MintyMiDraws - 03/12/2013
- I thought Lolitas wear tons of lacy clothing, which from what I see in this entry has none of that. She also needs more red accents on her head and feet. The wings things don't fit.
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- AzurePrototype - 03/12/2013
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Why not go the extra mile of stuff popular on DeviantArt and make her a pirate too... ^3^
Just jokes. Seriously though, she'll need something else on her head besides those goggles to make her pop, those goggles are seriously overused. You don't have to take them away, just add more to offset the usual and predictable. - Report As Spam
- garbage ghoul - 03/11/2013
- I really, really like her. Might I suggest a little more red on top and bottom to balance things out? Cause, all of my attention goes straight to her dress. owo
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