- by Clover Renevatio |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: Prismacolor practice
- Artist: Clover Renevatio
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Description:
Yeah, this was done in Primacolor markers (hence the title) but the line art was done on Corel Painter X.
Granted I draw this piece but I do not own this character (the character belongs to Xylaina)
Please, whatever rating you give this piece please tell my why you did so (it will really help me improve in the future.)
Character (c) Xylaina
Art (c) me - Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: prismacolor practice
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Clover Renevatio - 10/11/2008
- Oh my, thank you very, very much for the criticism I'm too far along with this piece to fix it but I'll definitely keep all this in mind for my future pictures. Again, thank you very much (every little bit helps. c: )
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- II Orgasm S p a s m II - 10/11/2008
- Clover, you want critisism, you got it. Makes the hips a little smaller. They don't fit the waist too well. The legs are too far apart, even if she is spreading them. You need to make them close together at the top and get further apart as they go down. Work on the nose. It's a bit too rounded for manga. And you have a bit too many markings under the chin. The ears look different sizes and they look uneven. Either one needs to be pulled back or one needs to be pushed forward. Overall, good pic.
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- ilovexanthe - 10/11/2008
- Cute!
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- Vivid Iridescence - 10/11/2008
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mm--ill try critisim, but it is really good @w@
most of the things I see are basically just my taste in styles so.....
but i think the hands could use a LITTLE work---so much better than mine T^T and the tail almost looks like it's coming out of her side...i dont really know why, maybe im just looking at it wrong..
really nice shading, very beautiful - Report As Spam
- Clover Renevatio - 10/11/2008
- Seriously people, even though all these compliments are great ego-boosts I would really like some criticism....please.
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- VirtualReject - 10/11/2008
- your eye style is amazing.
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- XxswaggababiixX - 10/11/2008
- i love it
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