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  • Title: Sara
  • Artist: Tselsebar
  • Description: A rather nice picture of Seraphina (Sara for short), another character from my potential web comic. Her design is not final, as I keep trying different wing designs, and I had intended to design a unique suit of armor rather than an all-too-common Chinese dress design. Still, all things considered, this turned out pretty well! CG'ed in Photoshop 7 from a pencil sketch.
  • Date: 07/09/2003
  • Tags: othersoriginal
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Gina_Kasumi - 02/27/2007
  • lose the halo, make the wings bigger, fix the
    lifted foot. The legs are great and the arms a
    little strange. the dress is beautiful but she
    looks a little lopsided in her bosoms. (lift them
    and make them even when you'tr drawing at that
    angle. also at this angle the foot on the ground's
    toe needs to be facing the front rather than
    pointing off to the side like that. it looks like
    she slipped on a bannana, which is not good if
    you're holding s sythe. ^_^
  • Fox Spirit Fean - 02/25/2007
  • try and talk about exactly what you like about the
    picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
    background?

    if you are critiquing, start with
    something you like about the picture, then mention
    specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
    too long, eyes are too big).
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