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  • Origin of San Valentine's Day
  • Title: Origin of San Valentine's Day
  • Artist: rliu
  • Description: This is a comic about the origin of San Valentine's Day, I did it for the school's newspaper, and there is a random part at the end of the story, xD free space?
  • Date: 02/11/2009
  • Tags: origin valentine
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Sheik Lloyd - 04/07/2009
  • Try having the panels read more like a 'Z', it'd be easier to understand like that. Or, I'm guessing the line down the center is supposed to be a page split? Maybe try making it bolder or darker, I just thought it was part of the panel frame and kept reading L to R.

    Also, finish sentences in a single frame or use elipses "..."

    Very good, keep it up!
  • XVII_matet - 03/08/2009
  • its a great comic. i just had a hard time knowing which parts go in order, but overall its good and i love the drawings
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